Final edit of the main project

First Draft of The Film Opening

As you can see there are several areas that do need to cleaned up, primarily this is in the move from the close-up to the turning on of the machine. Initially whilst filming this had been added at the last minute as it seemed like a good addition to the film by moving from general static camera set-ups to hand held in an unannounced and quite fast-paced sequence which would try to catch the audience off guard, signalling a sudden change in tone from the slow clinical precision of the first half to something unexpected (in that regards the sequence could've been seen as a proairetic/action code, as it signals a change of tone that causes the audience to be left in suspense as to what will happen next).

Unfortunately the shot doesn't work that well, as I caught the edge of the board with one of the shots which would've caused the mise-en-scene to have crumbled, so to try and preserve it, I cut these frames out, though it led to the disorientating effect that can be seen in the first draft above. So to counter this, I intend to replace this with a simple shot of the Assistant flicking the switch.

Also, the title sequence needs reediting to make the names appear in time with the beats, in fitting with some of the responses I got from the video that stated that it would